A storm crashed in the firmament,
And lightning smote the granite clouds.
The Sun’s wide path was covered, rent,
His figure lost, no longer proud.
Upon the earth a simple tree
Bends beneath the thunder’s fury,
And all around small creature cling
And quail beneath the violent surry.
Then, soon enough the storm is spent
And calm pervades the western wind.
But lo, the tree’s proud form is cracked
And lies upon the blasted heath,
And all we want and wonder, can,
Not serve to tell us when it sinned.
NICE. The imagery of this is precise, and it's a perfect metaphor, great diction, and LOVE the tone of it. Good. Good. Good!
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